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 # monolith
 A data hoarder's dream come true: bundle any web page into a stand-alone HTML file.  
-You can finally replace that gazillion of open tabs with a gazillion of  
+You can finally replace that gazillion of open tabs with a gazillion of .html files  
-huge .html files stored somewhere on your precious little drive.
+stored somewhere on your precious little drive.
 
-Unlike conventional "Save page as …", `monolith` saves the target  
+Unlike conventional "Save page as …", `monolith` not only saves the target document,
-document **and** embeds JavaScript, CSS and image assets **all at once**,  
+but embeds JavaScript, CSS and image assets **all at once**, resulting  
-resulting in a single HTML5 document that is a joy to store and share.
+in a single HTML5 document that is a joy to store and share.
 
 Works both on remote and local targets.
 
 If compared to saving websites with `wget -mpk`, `monolith` embeds all assets  
-as data-URIs and therefore would display the page exactly the same at any time,  
+as data-URIs and therefore would display the page exactly the same at any given time,  
-not depending on the Internet connection.
+being completely independent from the Internet.
 
 However, keep in mind that `monolith` is not aware of your browser's session.